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Read the following paragraph. For each set of sentences below the paragraph, select the letter of the sentence that provides the best revision for consistency; parallel structure; sentence variety; and fresh, concise language.
In 1929, toy dealer Edwin S. Lowe came across people having more fun than a barrel of monkeys while playing a game at a carnival in rural Georgia. A leader calls out each and every number, and the players use beans to cover the matching numbers on their cards. The winners yelled "Beano!" at the top of their lungs when they had filled in a row of numbers. Quick as a wink, Lowe saw the game was a winner. Sharp as a tack, he returned home and began testing the game on friends. Lowe markets the game as "Bingo!" and it sells like crazy.
Which sentence provides the best revision for consistency; parallel structure; sentence variety; and fresh, concise language?


Definitions:

Journal Entries

The method of recording financial transactions in an accounting system, where each transaction is entered twice to maintain the balance of the accounting equation.

Transactions

The events or interactions between businesses or individuals that have economic substance and can be measured in terms of money.

Trial Balance

A bookkeeping worksheet in which the balances of all ledgers are compiled into debit and credit account column totals that are equal, used to ensure the accounting entries are in balance.

T-Accounts

A visual representation used in accounting to show the debits and credits in separate columns for each account in the general ledger.

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