Read the Following Paragraph

question 6

Multiple Choice

Read the following paragraph. For each set of sentences below the paragraph, select the letter of the sentence that provides the best revision for consistency; parallel structure; sentence variety; and fresh, concise language.
In 1929, toy dealer Edwin S. Lowe came across people having more fun than a barrel of monkeys while playing a game at a carnival in rural Georgia. A leader calls out each and every number, and the players use beans to cover the matching numbers on their cards. The winners yelled "Beano!" at the top of their lungs when they had filled in a row of numbers. Quick as a wink, Lowe saw the game was a winner. Sharp as a tack, he returned home and began testing the game on friends. Lowe markets the game as "Bingo!" and it sells like crazy.
Which sentence provides the best revision for consistency; parallel structure; sentence variety; and fresh, concise language?

• A) Quick as a wink, Lowe saw the game was a winner.
• B) Quick as a wink, Lowe sees the game is a winner.
• C) Lowe immediately saw the potential of the game.

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Definitions:

Intensive Promotion

An aggressive marketing strategy that employs a wide range of advertising and promotional techniques to maximize consumer engagement and drive sales.

Cash Discount

A reduction in price offered to buyers as an incentive for making payment in cash or within a specified prompt payment period.

Net 30

A payment term indicating that the full payment is due 30 days from the invoice date.

Quantity Discount

A reduction in price based on the amount of product purchased, incentivizing larger orders.