Read the Following Paragraph

question 6

Multiple Choice

Read the following paragraph. For each set of sentences below the paragraph, select the letter of the sentence that provides the best revision for consistency; parallel structure; sentence variety; and fresh, concise language.
In 1929, toy dealer Edwin S. Lowe came across people having more fun than a barrel of monkeys while playing a game at a carnival in rural Georgia. A leader calls out each and every number, and the players use beans to cover the matching numbers on their cards. The winners yelled "Beano!" at the top of their lungs when they had filled in a row of numbers. Quick as a wink, Lowe saw the game was a winner. Sharp as a tack, he returned home and began testing the game on friends. Lowe markets the game as "Bingo!" and it sells like crazy.
Which sentence provides the best revision for consistency; parallel structure; sentence variety; and fresh, concise language?

• A) Quick as a wink, Lowe saw the game was a winner.
• B) Quick as a wink, Lowe sees the game is a winner.
• C) Lowe immediately saw the potential of the game.

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Definitions:

Prefrontal Cortex

The front part of the frontal lobe of the brain, involved in decision making, problem-solving, control of purposeful behaviors, and emotion regulation.

Executive Control System

A term often used interchangeably with executive control centre, refering to the brain networks involved in high-level cognitive functions such as decision making.

Corpus Callosum

A large band of neural fibers connecting the two hemispheres of the brain, facilitating communication between them.

Occipital Lobe

The Occipital Lobe is a region of the brain located at the back of the head, responsible for processing visual information from the eyes.