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Read the following paragraph. For each set of sentences below the paragraph, select the letter of the sentence that provides the best revision for consistency; parallel structure; sentence variety; and fresh, concise language.
In 1929, toy dealer Edwin S. Lowe came across people having more fun than a barrel of monkeys while playing a game at a carnival in rural Georgia. A leader calls out each and every number, and the players use beans to cover the matching numbers on their cards. The winners yelled "Beano!" at the top of their lungs when they had filled in a row of numbers. Quick as a wink, Lowe saw the game was a winner. Sharp as a tack, he returned home and began testing the game on friends. Lowe markets the game as "Bingo!" and it sells like crazy.
Which sentence provides the best revision for consistency; parallel structure; sentence variety; and fresh, concise language?

Definitions:

Assembly Rate

The speed or rate at which a product is assembled, which can affect production efficiency and output.

Direct Labor Hours

The total hours worked by employees directly involved in the manufacturing process of a company's products.

Finishing Rate

The pace at which a production process or construction project is completed, often measured in units per hour or days per project phase.

Machine Hours

A measure of the amount of time a machine is operated, used in cost accounting to allocate expenses to products.