Read the Following Paragraph

question 6

Multiple Choice

Read the following paragraph. For each set of sentences below the paragraph, select the letter of the sentence that provides the best revision for consistency; parallel structure; sentence variety; and fresh, concise language.
In 1929, toy dealer Edwin S. Lowe came across people having more fun than a barrel of monkeys while playing a game at a carnival in rural Georgia. A leader calls out each and every number, and the players use beans to cover the matching numbers on their cards. The winners yelled "Beano!" at the top of their lungs when they had filled in a row of numbers. Quick as a wink, Lowe saw the game was a winner. Sharp as a tack, he returned home and began testing the game on friends. Lowe markets the game as "Bingo!" and it sells like crazy.
Which sentence provides the best revision for consistency; parallel structure; sentence variety; and fresh, concise language?

• A) Quick as a wink, Lowe saw the game was a winner.
• B) Quick as a wink, Lowe sees the game is a winner.
• C) Lowe immediately saw the potential of the game.

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Definitions:

Lenders

Individuals or institutions that provide funds to borrowers under the condition of receiving back the principal amount plus interest.

Income Shares

A method often used in family law to determine the amount of child support payments based on the proportional income of each parent.

National Income

The total value of all goods and services produced by a country over a specific period, usually measured as Gross National Product (GNP) or Net National Product (NNP).

Capitalists

Individuals or entities that own capital goods, invest in production, and seek to generate profits within an economy.