The Revised Version of Mai Ling's Email to Harb, Under

question 42

Essay

The revised version of Mai Ling's email to Harb, under the discussion of professional tone, is longer than the original. Does this contradict what we've learned in earlier chapters about the need to write concisely? Explain your reasoning.

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Definitions:

Principals

Key stakeholders or the main parties involved in a financial transaction or agreement.

Managers

Individuals responsible for directing and overseeing the operations and activities of a company or organization, making strategic decisions to ensure goals are met.

Marginal Benefit

The increased pleasure or usefulness obtained from the consumption of one more unit of a good or service.