Unprofessional Thank-You Message for an Interview

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Unprofessional Thank-you Message for an Interview
After a job interview, a written message of appreciation shows professional courtesy and helps the interviewer remember you.Even if you don't want the job, interviewers may forward your resume to others who may be seeking applicants.
Stephanie has interviewed with a company that has communicated with her exclusively by email.She sends the following thank-you message via email as a follow up to her interview.
To: [e-mail]
From: [e-mail]
Subject: thanks :-)
Chuck,
I just wanted to send a quick thanx for the interview yesterday.I think we had a good chat and that you now know a little about me.It was great to meet all the neat people at your place and I think I would fit in real well with everyone.I have a lot to offer and I'm a hard worker.I'd like to hear from you ASAP as to whether or not I got the job.If I haven't heard from you by next week, I'll check in with you.I'd like to wrap things up with you guys or move along to some other job possibilities.I'm sure you understand that.
Steph
Required: Rewrite this unprofessional thank-you message for a job interview.

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