Read the Advertisement Below and Identify What Is Wrong by Re-Writing

question 25

Essay

Read the advertisement below and identify what is wrong by re-writing the advertisement to be more legally compliant and explaining why you added or deleted any words or phrases.
Part Time Daycare Worker Wanted
Small daycare center is looking for fresh faces to care for our 3- to 4-year -old age group. Grandmotherly-types also welcome to apply. Previous experience with babysitting or daycare preferred. High school diploma required. Must be able to bend, lift, stoop, and play with the children. Must be able to work flexible hours as needed. Discounted daycare provided for those with children. Competitive wage and benefits package available.

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Definitions:

Trace

Trace often refers to a very small amount or indication of something that is hardly noticeable or is present in minimal concentrations.

Carbohydrates

Organic compounds, including sugars, starch, and cellulose, which are an important source of energy for the body; found in a variety of foods.

Butter

A dairy product made from churning milk or cream, commonly used as a spread or cooking ingredient, known for its rich flavor and high-fat content.

Thiamine

A vitamin belonging to the B complex (Vitamin B1), essential for glucose metabolism and plays a key role in nerve, muscle, and heart function.