Which Quality in the List Below Is Evident in the Revised

question 28

Multiple Choice

Which quality in the list below is evident in the revised version of the following paragraph?
Original: During our monthly meeting last month, we all came to the conclusion that overtime procedures are inadequate and that new procedures need to be initiated. I discussed this problem with our chief accountant, who was sympathetic and agreed to consider any changes we would like to make to the present procedures. Please bring your suggested changes to this month's departmental meeting scheduled for 2:30 P.M. next Wednesday afternoon.
Revision: During last month's meeting, we concluded that our overtime procedures need revision. Our chief accountant has agreed to consider any changes we would like to make to the present procedures. Please bring your suggested changes to this month's departmental meeting scheduled for 2:30 P.M. next Wednesday.

• A) conciseness
• B) accuracy
• C) comprehensiveness
• D) correctness

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Definitions:

Neutral Self-Talk

The practice of engaging in inner dialogue that is neither overly positive nor negative, but rather objective and factual.

Overlearn

The process of continuing to study or practice beyond just mastering the material, to ensure longer-term retention.

Caffeinated Beverages

Drinks containing caffeine, a stimulant, which can boost alertness and energy levels.

Positive Self-Talk

The practice of making affirming statements to oneself, which can boost confidence, reduce stress, and improve overall mental health.