Which Quality in the List Below Is Evident in the Revised

question 28

Multiple Choice

Which quality in the list below is evident in the revised version of the following paragraph?
Original: During our monthly meeting last month, we all came to the conclusion that overtime procedures are inadequate and that new procedures need to be initiated. I discussed this problem with our chief accountant, who was sympathetic and agreed to consider any changes we would like to make to the present procedures. Please bring your suggested changes to this month's departmental meeting scheduled for 2:30 P.M. next Wednesday afternoon.
Revision: During last month's meeting, we concluded that our overtime procedures need revision. Our chief accountant has agreed to consider any changes we would like to make to the present procedures. Please bring your suggested changes to this month's departmental meeting scheduled for 2:30 P.M. next Wednesday.

• A) conciseness
• B) accuracy
• C) comprehensiveness
• D) correctness

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Definitions:

Racial Differences

Pertains to the distinctive attributes, characteristics, or social experiences that are associated with identifiable groups of people categorized based on perceived physical attributes or ancestry.

Depression

A mental state disorder where an individual experiences consistent dejection or a reduction in finding pleasure in activities, adversely impacting everyday functionality.

Cross-cultural Differences

Variations in how different cultural groups perceive, interpret, or practice certain behaviors or phenomena.

Suicide Rates

Suicide Rates refer to the number of suicide deaths in a given population within a specified time frame, usually per year.