Poor Example of a Job-Refusal Message

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Poor Example of a Job-Refusal Message
Saying no tactfully is important since future job success often is influenced by previous interactions with people in various circumstances.Rodrigo has received a job offer but has decided not to take the job.He sends the following job-refusal message to the company.
Dear Mr.Pates:
I regret to inform you that I must turn down your offer of the sales associate position.I have recently received an offer that provides more opportunity for growth and better monetary compensation.Given my personal goals,I believe that it would be a mistake for me not to take this offer.
Thank you for your consideration.I wish you the best of luck finding someone who meets your needs.
Cordially,
Rodrigo Martinez
Required:
Rewrite the job-refusal message for better human relations.

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Definitions:

Synaptic Cleft

The narrow gap between the terminal end of a neuron and the neighboring neuron or muscle cell, across which neurotransmitters are released to transmit signals.

Schwann Cell

A type of glial cell that forms the myelin sheath around nerve fibers in the peripheral nervous system.

Neuron Cell Body

Enlarged portion of the neuron containing the nucleus and other organelles; also called nerve cell body.

Axon

Main central process of a neuron that normally conducts action potentials away from the neuron cell body.