Which Quality in the List Below Is Evident in the Revised

question 28

Multiple Choice

Which quality in the list below is evident in the revised version of the following paragraph?
Original: During our monthly meeting last month, we all came to the conclusion that overtime procedures are inadequate and that new procedures need to be initiated. I discussed this problem with our chief accountant, who was sympathetic and agreed to consider any changes we would like to make to the present procedures. Please bring your suggested changes to this month's departmental meeting scheduled for 2:30 P.M. next Wednesday afternoon.
Revision: During last month's meeting, we concluded that our overtime procedures need revision. Our chief accountant has agreed to consider any changes we would like to make to the present procedures. Please bring your suggested changes to this month's departmental meeting scheduled for 2:30 P.M. next Wednesday.

• A) conciseness
• B) accuracy
• C) comprehensiveness
• D) correctness

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Definitions:

Good Manager

Describes an individual who effectively guides and supports their team, making informed decisions and fostering a positive and productive work environment.

Canadian Employers

Organizations, businesses, or government bodies located in Canada that hire and manage employees.

Supervisory

Relating to the oversight and direction of work or workers, often involving tasks such as guidance, management, and evaluation.

Immigrants

Individuals who move from one country to another, typically for the purpose of seeking employment, better living conditions or to escape conflict.